WiththeincreasinguseoftheInternetmoreandmorestudentsareusingtheircomputerstobuythingslikebooks,cosmeticsandmobilephones.Somepeoplesaythatshoppingonlineisbestwhileothersprefershoppinginstores,Whichdoyouprefer?
写作范文：SayNotoOnlineShopping
Inrecentyears,onlineshoppinghasbecomeincreasinglypopularinChina.Thelastdecadewitnessedadramaticincreaseinthenumberofpeopleoptingforonlineshopping.Somepeopleclaimthatonlineshoppingcancompletelyreplaceshoppinginretailstores,Giventhesecurityandproductqualityconcernsofonlineshopping,however,lamagainstshoppingonline.
Firstly,shoppingonlinehasprovedtobenotsafeenough.Consumerswhobuyproductsonlineneedtoprovidetheirprivateinformation,suchasIDnumber,personalandcreditcarddetailswhichcanbestolenandusedfraudulentlybyskillfulcrackersandhackers.Furthermore,e-commerceusingcheckandcreditcardsleavestheclientsvulnerabletobankingfraudwhichremainsthetopsecurityconcernsforpeoplewhenitcomestoonlineshopping.Secondly,thequalityoftheproductsboughtonlinecannotbeguaranteed.Somefunctionalproductssuchasapparelandelectronicdevicescannotbetriedortestedonline.Unliketraditionalretailstores,onlineshopscannotprovideyouwiththechancetochecktheproduct'squalitybeforebuyingthem.Onlineshoppersareworriedthattheproductswillnotbewhattheyhaveexpectedwhenviewingwebpages.
Itistruethatonlineshoppingoffersanattractivelistofbenefits,withthemostobviousbeingtheconvenienceitbringstotheshoppers.Nevertheless,duetoitssecurityandproductqualityconcerns,Ipersonallyholdthatonlineshoppingisfarfrombeingagoodchoiceforshoppers.(238words)
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1.Somedrawbacksofshoppingonlinearethelackofsecurityandtheproblemforcompulsiveshoppers.
网上购物的一些不足之处是缺乏安全性以及购物狂的问题。
2.Youdonotknowifyoucant:rustthewebsiteyouuseandevenifitistrustworthy,hackersmaystillstealyourcreditcardinformation.
你不知道你能不能信任你所用的网站。即使这个网站是可靠的，黑客仍会盗取你的信用卡信息。
3.Sincetheonlinestoresareopen24/7,youcanalwaysbuynewgoods,whichisespeciallyharmfulforpeoplewholackdisciplineorwhoarecompulsiveshoppers.
因为网上商店是每天全天候营业的，你总是可以买到新的商品，这对于那些缺乏自制力的人和购物狂尤其有害。
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