一、长短句原则短句放在段首或者段末,可以揭示主题:Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.
强烈建议:在文章第一段用一长一短开头;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句介绍主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式;文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
三、一二三原则1)inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,lastly2)tobeginwith,furthermore,finally3)tostartwith,inaddition,finally4)firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast5)foronething,foranotherthing(适用于两点的情况)
四、短语优先原则两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点;其二、凑字数Icannotbearit.可以用短语表达:Icannotputupwithit.Iwantit.可以用短语表达:Iamlookingforwardtoit.
五、多实少虚原则一定要多用实词,少用虚词(比较大的词)。good,nice空洞,generous,humorous,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospitable形象。再比如:走出房间空洞的词是:walkoutoftheroom但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip/sneakoutoftheroom小姐走出房间应该说:sailoutoftheroom小孩走出房间应该说:danceoutoftheroom老人走出房间应该说:staggeroutoftheroom
六、多变句式原则1)加法(串联)
5)附加(多此一举)
Ms.Pan,anEnglishteacherwhohastaughtusforthreesemesters,iseasy-going.6)排比(排山倒海句)
一个个排比句,一个个对偶句,一个个不定式,一个个短语,使文章有排山倒海之势!
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