The increasing use of (扣every day) social media in different ways(扣keep in touch with others and news events) is one of the fundamental changes that is irreversibly transforming society. This essay will delve into(钻研/挖掘) the positive and negative aspects of the phenomenon and outline which factors matter the most.
(开头段第一句写的很好,对于题目要点很有技巧的进行了改写与概括;第二句话没有给出个人观点,但是给出了一句会outline which factors matter the most, 在真实考试中,如果题目是Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 仍然建议大家开头就表态,不是必须的,但是会更保险一些)
The prominent advantage provided by social media platforms is instant gratification. At the click of a button, the world is on your doorstep. Being a social animal, the feeling of always being connected is the innate desire for all human beings. Through using social media such as Facebook or instagram every day, people upload pictures of their life-events, share their opinions, and voice their concerns. It is through these interactions that readers get to know about the latest trends and opinionated views of what is happening in the world.
(主体1段:好处段- 集中讨论了人作为社会动物,需要每天感觉到与社会和外界的关联,这一点,社交媒体可以完美的辅助做到)
Conversely, the extensive use of social media is leading us to a significant chasm in everyday human interactions that is critical for the human race as a whole. People are content with scrolling through life updates of a friend/ family member and getting influenced by fake news published on such websites. The conventional concept of meeting in person and celebrating together is dying its slow death. People have stopped reading news from the verified sources which strictly follow publishing regulations, but are blindly regarding news on Social media as the truth day after day.
(主体2段:弊端段,讲了社交媒体的弊端如容易有虚假信息,同时也点明了每天使用,频繁使用会造成传统交流方式的极大减少)
In conclusion, it is fair to say that the internet and Social media platforms have undoubtedly provided a common ground for people to stay connected. Still, at the same time, it has also given rise to isolation and fake news. It is therefore imperative that people using these websites do so with a pinch of salt as the cons outweigh the pros to a fair extent.
(with a pinch of salt: 有所保留,留有余地)
(结尾段:第一句总结好处,第二句总结弊端,第三句给出自己立场)
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