普通回应:I like basketball.I often play it with my friends in my spare time.Playing basketball is fun and good for my health.
创意回应:I like basketball but I really want to try extreme sports like bungee jumping.I think it’s really cool and exciting to experience freefall although I would probably scream like a girl.
普通回应的长度还是OK的,有拓展,但是表达太普通,是大部分学员都会的,词汇和句式没亮点。创意回应的句式虽然也并不难,但是有虚拟语气,有转折,层次丰富点,而且bungee jumping和freefall远比be good for使用频率低,更高级,此外scream like a girl用到了比喻的修辞手法很生动。很明显创意回应还是会在分数上胜出。