Nowadays,withtheimprovementofthepeople’slivingstandard,somepeopleformahabitofraisingsmallordomesticanimalsaspets.Someraisesmalldogsorcatsastheirpetswhileothersraisevariousbirdsorfishesastheirpets.(阐述现象段)
However,somepeopleobjecttotheideaofraisinganimalsaspets.Tothem,animalshavetheirownrighttoliveanaturallifelikehumanbeings.Ontheotherhand,thewaypeopleraiseanimalsaspetshaveanegativeinfluenceonthesurroundings,forexample,dogs’chasingpeopleonthestreetandsoon.What’smore,someanimalswilltransmitsomediseases.(对比论证段)
Inmyopinion,Idonotliketheideatoraiseanimalsaspets.Weshouldnotdeprivethemoftheirnaturalright.Inthisway,wewillliveinapeacefulworldinharmonywiththeotherlivingcreatures.(总结观点段)