Ihadastreakoftoughluckyesterday.Everything，itseemedtome，wentwrong.AndIsimplycouldn’tunderstandwhyallthebadthingshappenedtomeinonesingleday.
Inthemorning，asluckwouldhaveit，myalarmclockdidn’tring，andwithanachingheadIwokeuphalfanhourlaterthanusual.Iwasinsuchahurrythat，whenmakinganomelet，Igotmyfingersburntandsplashedtheomeletalloverthefloorofthekitchen.
Havingnotimeformybreakfastatthatpoint，Irushedoutofmyhousewithanemptystomachandhurtingfingers.Ihadintendedtocatchthe7:30subway，butsomehowIcouldn’tmakeit.IbecameverynervousatthemerethoughtofbeinglateformyEnglishclass，becausemyEnglishteacherisverystrictanddemanding，andhegetsangrywheneveranystudentislateforhisclass.
Aftergettingoffthe7:40subway，Iracedallthewayfromthestationtomyschool，thinkingitwouldbeimpossibleformetoflagataxiatthishouroftheday.Atthecornerofthestreetnearmyschool，Iabruptlybumpedintoamanand，worseluck，broketheglassesIhadboughtfor500yuanjustlastweek.Withscarcelyanytimetoreceiveorofferanapology，Ijustkeptonrunningandrunning.Atlonglast，Iarrivedattheschoolonlytofind，withgreatsadnessmixedwithsomerelief，thattheschoolwasemptyandtheclassroomswerealllocked.ItwasSaturday.
Myillluckshowednosignofcomingtoanend.WhenIreturnedhomegreatlyfrustrated，Ifoundmyselflockedout.InmyhurryIhadforgottentobringthekeywithme.Justmyluck!
【点评】这篇文章按照时间顺序一气呵成。文章的标题、第一句和最后一句都点出了中心思想：“Ihadamostunluckyday”。故事从作者醒来开始，在慌慌张张中煎蛋卷、赶地铁、急奔学校、撞破眼镜、发现白忙乎了一场，最后猛然清醒——匆忙之中忘了钥匙!整个故事描述得精彩生动，既有动作的细节又有作者内心的感受，让读者也身临其境地体会了倒霉的一天。
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