[Youhavebeenaskedtorecommendaparticularbrandofbreadforuseinelementaryschoolsinasmallcity.Whichofthefourbrandsofbreaddescribedinthechartwouldyourecommend?Supportyourchoicewithinformationfromthechartbelow.]
Whichbrandofbreadisthemostsuitableforelementaryschoolchildren?Beforewemakethechoice,therearethreethingsweneedtotakeintoaccount:taste,nutritionandcost.
Amongthethree,Ibelievenutritionisthemostimportant.Childreninelementaryschoolsareatanagewhentheirbodiesaregrowingrapidly.Malnutritionwillcertainlyhindertheirbodiesfromgrowing,andpoorhealthwilloftenresultinpoorlearning.Tasteisalsoimportantbecausetastybreadcanhelpstimulatechildren'sappetite.Childrenwillnotliketoeatpoor-tastingbreadregardlessofitslevelofnutrition.Agoodappetiteguaranteessufficientnutrition.
Therefore,IwillcertainlyrecommendBrandA,becausebothitsnutritionandtasteareverygood.
NeitherBrandCnorBrandDisagoodchoicebecausetheformerhasaverygoodnutritionalratingbutnotagoodtaste;whilethelatterhasanexcellenttastebutonlyafairnutritionalrating.
Beinglessnutritionalandtasteful,BrandBisnotasgoodachoiceasBrandA,despitetheirsimilarcosts.So,thatleavesonlyBrandA.ItistruethatBrandAhasthehighestprice,butIbelievethatmostoftheschoolswouldnotreallymindpayingalittlebitmoremoneyforschoolchildren'sbetterhealth.
作文结构分析：
·Whichbrandofbreadtochoose?
*Threefactorstobeconsidered:nutrition,tasteandcost
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