Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsonthelonelylifeofagedpeople.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
Givenisasimplebutthought-provokingcartoon:anagedgrandmasitsinfrontofmirror,lookingat"herself"inthemirrorandsayingtoherself,"Ifeelratherlonelywhenmysongoestoworkandmygrandsonstudiesinschool."
首句功能为:引出图画;之后为图画内容描述,主要是四要素:人/物、动作、文字和环境,写出四要素中的两三点即可。
Obviously,thiscartooncanbenaturallyassociatedwiththesignificanceofchildren’saccompanyforagedparents:ifelderlypeopleintendtoenjoyhappiness,itisadvisablefortheirchildrentospendmoretimeinparents.Incontemporarysociety,ithasbecomeatrendforyoungpeopletobebusywiththeirworkandstudy.Meanwhile,anincreasingnumberofyoungstersfinditdifficulttohavesparetimetoaccompanylonelyparents.However,itisadultchildren’saccompanythatenablesagedparentstobuildupadequatehope,loveandenthusiasmforlife.Asamatteroffact,youngpeopleinlargenumbershavenotcometorealizethelonelinessofagedpeople.
二段首句:图画联系主题;之后if句为图画简单评论;incontemporarysociety一句为图画所暗含的社会现象;meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受;however之后为强调句式,论述意义;尾句是万能总结。
Asayoungster,Iamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforustoaccompanyagedparents,nomatterhowbusyweare.Accordingly,weshouldeducate,advocateandencourageourfriends,classmatesandacquaintancestolove,respectandcareallelderlypeople.(196words)