四六级作文决胜在于创造闪光点（一）思维导图

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2023-03-15

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　　高分作文标志　　1：120-150字；150-180字；　　2、是否长短句交叉；　　3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；　　4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；　　下面给出写好一篇作文的注

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4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.

2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

比如说：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…

3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,

people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone'scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone'scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

下面举一篇一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

ComputerandI

BySimmy

Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationIhadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.

exceedingly替换very

thrilling替换exciting

sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.

google替换search

anarmyof替换alotof

Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!

Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；

Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular

Coincidentwith…非常地道的词汇，表达"与…一致"的意思，替换With…

Advancement替换development

Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto

Current(currently)替换now

Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.

Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople

Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的

Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.

Forastart替换Tobeginwith

Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法

ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动

Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides

Deliver替换send

Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.

Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有however作为插入语，functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto

Emerging代替appearing(fading代替disappearing)

Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词（编者：如果用netizen就完美了！）

Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.

Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides

Computersdoplay，do强调

Positive替换important/good等

Asliceof替换apartof

Unfavorable替换bad

Impacts替换effects/influences

Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语

Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)

Facet替换aspect[1][]

一、研究内容思维导图